Invisible Gesticulations - Venia's Ironic Name

From: dadragoness Date: July 11th, 2008 08:20 pm (UTC) WoW. (Link)

I was reading it so quickly the pages could not load fast enough!
This is intense sweetheart.

You also have given me plenty to think about.
What more could i possibly ask for?

Outstanding!
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A contemplative Dragoness signing off!

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From: setsuled Date: July 11th, 2008 08:31 pm (UTC) Re: WoW. (Link)

Thanks. I'm very glad you liked it.

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From: dadragoness Date: July 11th, 2008 08:42 pm (UTC) Re: WoW. (Link)

I hope i didnt say the same thing last time.
You keep surprising me!

I must say your journey has been an interesting one.

I can understand why this was a tough chapter to flesh out so to speak.

I can tell already im not going to want this story to end.

And she is so gently beautiful, so ephemeral appearing...yet so resolved & so strong & tenacious.

Even the torturer is multi dimensional.

Very complicated figures.

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From: setsuled Date: July 12th, 2008 06:40 am (UTC) Re: WoW. (Link)

You keep surprising me!

I'm glad.

I can tell already im not going to want this story to end.

If it's anything like Boschen and Nesuko, it'll last at least two years. I can tell you for certain I haven't revealed a third of the tip of the iceberg.

Very complicated figures.

Thanks. Though I'm a huge Star Wars fan, I'm definitely in the school of thought that says there should be no soulless stormtroopers.

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From: stsisyphus Date: July 14th, 2008 04:25 am (UTC) (Link)

No need to mince words. I liked it.

The final sequence felt a little harsher than I was comfortable with personally, but seeing as I have a dick - not too surprising. still, it's a good point. For some reason he really thought it would save him. A good point to divest him of some illusions.

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From: setsuled Date: July 14th, 2008 11:04 am (UTC) (Link)

I liked it.

I'm glad.

The final sequence felt a little harsher than I was comfortable with personally, but seeing as I have a dick - not too surprising.

It didn't really bother me, but maybe that's simply because I was so firmly concentrating on Venia's POV.

For some reason he really thought it would save him.

Maybe. I think he just thought it was worth a try, but I don't mind if you see at as him being certain.

A good point to divest him of some illusions.

Well, he's divested of all cognitive functions now.

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